Working on the Second Celestial Abductions story

March 29, 2013 | Beauty Stone Beast Series, Blog News, Eternals | Permalink

Well, this is turning out to be a bit of a grueling thing… I know what I want to happen in this story… I already have these three short stories mapped out, honestly… But, crazy thing is, I can’t seem to get focused. I keep trying to consider what am I missing in making this story better than the first?

I am not turning any of these stories into a novel. They are meant to be shorts. Nothing that steals away your time, but instead a nice, luxurious, yet simple read, maybe while sitting in front of a fire, sipping on a latte, or relaxing in bed. I just need to stop, relax, and focus on the story the characters are trying to tell me.

I know I shouldn’t be. But I am a review mongrel. I thrive on reading what the audience thinks. The reviews on the first of this series have been hard. Many like the story. Most don’t like how short it is. Some even feel the money they spent was wasted because of the story being short. I don’t want to go over 60 pages on any of these stories… They aren’t meant to be. They’re actually setting the scene for something bigger. Just as my Beauty Stone Beast series has… (OOPS! I didn’t just give away a secret, did I?)

Anyway, to those of you who have read Sparrow’s Release, and liked it… I thank you. For those of you who were disappointed, I am sorry. I don’t decide the sales price when the books go up. My publishers go by the suggested pricing bracket and for what it’s worth, I think that is fair. They may not take me forever to write and finish once I get started. But the time I spend working on the overall idea might surprise you. Then, there are the edits… And don’t forget we have to pay a portion of each sale out to the company hosting the story. We don’t just put up our stories on Amazon, and reap the rewards freely.

I don’t want people to be unhappy with my work. I just want to write and share the fantasies that run around in my head. Where they go when I start writing, well… that’s anyone’s guess. Some stories try to turn into EPIC novels… Others turn out to just be short and sweet. My only true goal is to entertain and maybe brighten the day of anyone looking for a fictional fantasy escape.

 

Why are people so Brutal?

March 20, 2013 | Blog News, Eternals | Permalink

I read an article just a bit ago about 30 elephants slaughtered for their tusks in Chad, Africa. They gathered up and killed the babies first. Then when the parents cameto try to help their children, the bastards killed them all for their tusks. Really? For the Ivory? I mean, good grief!

Is no life sacred anymore? Stupid question, I guess. I mean, if they don’t hardly blink an eye at any OTHER animal and feel no regret on killing children, then why the hell would they care about elephants? It just breaks my heart. This is the world I’m stuck in. I wonder sometimes if people just don’t have souls anymore. Because I cannot fathom how humans can do all the terrible things they do if they have one. If it upsets me this bad, how is it the people that did it can live with themselves?

Why? I know that not everyone cares about all the miraculous creatures on this earth, but I do! And I feel so helpless when I hear about these things. Sure, I can sign petitions. I can write on my blogs. I can rant and rave and bitch about all the jackasses of the world, but the truth is, UNTIL MORE OF US CARE… Nothing will change.

I am posting this on my other blog too… so if you see multiples of this post, that’s why. Sorry, nothing uplifting to say today. I’m too angry and I feel too helpless.

Bad Reviews not Really too Bad…

January 31, 2013 | Blog News | Permalink

I am wanting to send out thanks for the reviews I have on Amazon for the first in a new teaser series I have out; Sparrow’s Release. I do appreciate these reviews as even though they are not perfectly shining, none of them discredited the story itself.

The reviews aren’t GOLDEN, mind you. Actually, they average out at about 3 stars. But the funny thing about these reviews is the complaining is NOT about the content of the story, or the writing, not even issues with grammar. Actually, many of them remark that the story itself is good. No… the low ratings stem from feeling the story is too short, or priced too high to be so short.

What strikes me as odd in all this is, I have NOVELS out, which are well over 70,000 words. But most people on Amazon don’t even bother to leave reviews for them, even though my stats say people are buying them. So, I’m a little perplexed. If you will spend the $6.00 for the full Novel, but not take the time to review said book, why do you spend the time to come back and review something that cost you $4.00 and took not even a third of the time to read?

I put the teaser stories out because I believe it is a good way to acquaint a reader to my style of writing. The length of the story is not kept a secret that you only find out AFTER you pay. If you read the shorter stories, and you like the way I wrote them, then perhaps you will take the risk on one of my longer stories. If you would like examples of my writing without having to pay, please feel free to follow my blog. I try to post chapters here and there of my larger stories. I LOVE to get the feedback. I invite anyone and everyone to follow my blog. Read about ALL my characters and discover what’s new in their lives.

 

Excerpt from Eternal Night — How it ALL Began

January 17, 2013 | Blog News, Eternals | Permalink

Prologue

Before the Eternals

The explosions were gaining on them. Muse ran as if the hounds of hell were upon her. Her brother followed closely behind, hurriedly urging her to go even faster. “You must keep running, sister. We are almost to the transference chamber.”

She did her best to comply, frustrated to not be able to shift. “If I could turn, I could move us both much faster.” Her owl form would easily cover the distance to the hidden chamber beneath the caverns of their home world, Rohestia, in half the time it was taking them to run on their human legs.

Their planet was small and basically defenseless from the intruders from the farthest star. Already, the inhabitants of their community, including their parents and siblings had been taken. Soon, their people would be put to work on the silver planet; home to the Demonion species.

The Demonion’s were a race of thick scaly skinned monsters, with long curvy horns which sprouted from their heads. They were said to be the true sons of Lucifer. Because Lucifer had no daughters, they raided the smaller, weaker planets of their galaxy and took the females to mate with and the males to use as slaves. This was not the first time they had attacked the people of Rohestia. Many times before over the past centuries, they had annihilated other cities and towns of the Rohestian world, taking the people young enough to suit. The elderly they simply killed.

Muse and Tenaryn had been ordered to hide, then once night fell, make their way to the Transferance chamber, where they could escape to the Galaxy that housed the world, Gaia. Gaia was a sister planet that had not been discovered by the Demonions as of yet.

Just as they reached the chamber, the battle cry of their enemy let them know they had not escaped yet. Tenaryn pushed Muse into the Chamber, following swiftly behind. As he hit the panel which made the wall to hide the chamber slide into place, the Demonion, fired the first shot of their lazer, trying to hinder the wall closing.

When he turned, Muse was already activating the transference stone. As she dialed in the ancient symbols needed to take them to a sister planet in a different galaxy, Tenaryn took his place beside her on the stone. Looking at her with a sad expression, he opened his hand and began letting his magic build. Muse whimpered in alarm when she looked from his face to his hand.

“It’s the only way, sister. To keep them from following us, we must destroy the chamber.” He explained softly, so the enemy would not hear.

She nodded, even as she answered, “So we can never return.” She looked up into his eyes. “What of the others? Are we dooming anyone still here to our parents fate?”

Tenaryn spoke an incantation and released the energy orb out into the chamber and watched as it began to grow. As the transference of their energies began, he turned and took Muse’s hand. “Father already searched. We are the last. Our planet is dying now. There is no one left.”

He looked back toward the orb as it now seemed to engulf the room. “On Gaia, I will choose others to become as we are, and begin building an army strong enough to stop this enemy before they ever have the chance to start attacking that world. We will survive this, sister.” As they were transported from their world, they only heard the beginnings of the explosion, and the start of the Demonions pained screams.

Soon, they began their new life on the planet they had known as Gaia. They also began using their abilities to help the people who looked so much like them, but did not share their powers. Muse gained a kinship with the plants and animals. Tenaryn began to slowly pick and choose the warriors who would become the guardians against the evils from both within their world, and without.

In all that time, Muse never asked Tenaryn to gift someone of her choosing; except once. . .

 

Gideon

 

If the warrior had only known what his fate would be, he would have gladly surrendered his life instead of going into this holy war. But it had been at the Kings demand. If he played a part in taking down the Moorish, Saracens, and other enemies of the Church, he would return to his country a free man.

Within days of being in the strange new land, he had begun to see the crusades were nothing more than an excuse for bloodshed of the most horrific kind. He could follow the orders to kill the men who held up arms against them, but when the command came to kill the pregnant wife of one of the men he’d slain, he could no longer abide such tyranny. His logic begged the question of him; What God would order the death of a helpless woman and unborn child? And he knew the answer. Not his. The God he had always served and believed in was merciful and had sacrificed his own son to put an end to things like this!

He made his decision then to break away from the ranks and leave. There was nothing of his country to go back to anyway. He would find a new place to call home. He was, by trade, a blacksmith. He once made exquisite swords for the King and Knights of his homeland. But now, he vowed he’d make no more. Now he wanted only to find a place to live in peace. But his change of heart came too late. For there were those which remained unseen who had witnessed the commands he’d followed before he felt the prick of conscience. And as far as they were concerned, he had sealed his fate.

He did not see the attack coming. He’d never even known he was in danger until it was too late. The number of men who surrounded him were more than he could have hoped to fend off and he had been rendered unconscious within mere moments. When he awoke, it was to find himself in a pit of some kind, in the company of something who could never be confused for Human.

The Creature was hideous. Its head was shaped strangely, and it was completely bald with the skull seeming to be nearly twice the mass of a normal mans. Eyes, darker than the darkest depths of the blackest abyss stared back at him when he had first seen it. Long yellowed teeth protruded from its mouth much like the teeth of a saber toothed tiger which it used to drink from his veins repeatedly. Sometimes the creature took from his neck. Other times it attached itself to his wrist. In the beginning, he would fight, still clinging to the hope of freedom. But as weakness set in, the will to fight left him and he only wished for death.

The only thing to still appear human about this monster was the fact it still walked on its hind legs. Its hands no longer bore any resemblance to those of man. They were longer, and half of each finger seemed to be razor sharp claws in place of a normal mans flesh.

Gideon covered his head and lay in a fetal position at this point, praying to the God of man to just take him already and have done with it. Let the accursed thing have all of his life blood as long as he didn’t have to live through it. The pain was near unbearable and the Beast only seemed to laugh at him and the torment would continue.

Now, he was merely a dry empty husk, waiting in stone silence for the moment when the creature would show mercy and let him die. He was ready to die. He found himself praying for it. In death, he could be reunited with the ones he loved above all others.

But death, it seemed, was not what fate had in store for him. As he began to find it hard to draw breath, he was taken from the pits and left, deserted on a long stretch of desert, with no shelter in sight. If his fate was to have been different, then upon the rising of the sun, he would have known death. The creature who tormented him, slowly feeding off both his blood and his souls essence had been a Nosferatu, a specific, deadly type of vampire. Soulless creatures with no care for the life or emotions of others for they have none of their own.

Had he been left there all night, he would have burnt to death when the sun rose. His ashes would have scattered with the wind and he would have been nothing but a distant memory. But instead this was the night which forever changed his life. It was the night his God decided he would join the ranks of the Eternals. It was this night when she found him.

She was a beautiful woman with long onyx hair and eyes the deepest shade of green which seemed to glow with an almost unearthly light. She placed her hand on his forehead and whispered soft words. Almost immediately, he fell into a deep sleep.

When he woke, in the woman’s place, was an Owl; an almost mystical bird which seemed to have an intelligence about her that could only be described as surreal. She guided him to the place where he met Tenaryn, the Wizard who told him of what he had become and offered him the chance to become something more than he ever thought to be.

At first, he wanted nothing, save revenge on the ones who had cursed him to this fate. He fought Tenaryn tooth and nail when it came to learning the safe ways he could feed from warm blooded animals or humans when his hunger was great without causing them damage. He didn’t want peaceful feedings. He wanted slaughter to the ones who robbed him of mortal breath.

Tenaryn, his mentor, had granted him the right to seek out revenge on the creature that had done this to him, but refused his thirst for revenge on the people who had held a part in his fate. When his anger cooled, he understood why. As he wanted revenge on them, they’d only been seeking revenge for their loved ones tortured and killed by his hand. It was an eye for an eye and they were, as Tenaryn told him, innocent of anything more.

Through every trial, the new Eternal, Gideon faced, the Owl, with eyes which reminded him of the beautiful unearthly woman he had dreamt of that strange night, stayed at his side committed to helping him accept his new life. She became more to him than just a constant companion and pet. She was his friend. He trusted her more than even the Wizard who had taught him how to survive.

For centuries, Gideon was known as the Eternal who fought with two swords and carried a hauntingly beautiful Owl on his shoulder. He never once questioned who the Owl was or why she came to him. He only believed their destiny’s to be intertwined.

Show of Hands . . .

December 18, 2012 | Blog News | Permalink

Okay, so just because, I never see anyone respond to any of my posts, I am going to try something new. If you actually stop and read through my blogs, I want to challenge you to leave me a comment. It doesn’t have to be any fantastic response. Just a simple hello, or hi there and I will be happy.

Sometimes, though, I write posts I think SURELY people will like, then when I come back and check, NO ONE has said ANYTHING… Makes me feel like I may just be wasting my time. How about this… If you’ve read my books, which one is the latest you’ve read? Is there an element you would like to see in my stories that aren’t there yet?

I’m just wondering, because I really believe people are reading my posts. But when no one responds, I’m just not sure. So give me a shoutout, please?

The Next Big Thing blog hop

December 12, 2012 | Blog News, Eternals | Permalink

Well, hello there, everyone! This Blog Post is actually a little exciting. I was asked to participate and thought it would be fun! I LOVE talking about the story ideas running amok in my brain! As part of this, I am also supposed to tag up to five other Authors, but because it was so close to Christmas, I had no luck in finding ANYONE who was interested.

So instead, what I am going to do is send you to a few blogs of a few Authors I enjoy following myself. They are each amazing and talented individuals.

The first is Charlotte Holley. She writes Paranormal Mystery and various Young Adult. She ALSO participated in this NBT blog hop as well, so her latest post is sure to be an intriguing read! Her blog is http://chalaedra.livejournal.com

The second is Tracy Pacelli. She is an Author of Young Adult fantasy and romance.  I personally read a book of hers called, Time Warped and I was so hooked on it, I couldn’t put it down. I think I actually finished it in one day! Her blog is http://traceypacelli.com/

Next, I would like to send attention to Anne Petzer. She writes Mysteries and Adventure books. She also tirelessly writes in her blog about other Authors and their books. She is an inspiration and an excellent Author to boot! her blog is http://annehpetzer.wordpress.com/

And lastly, another Author I know has participated in the NBT blog hop. Denise Bartlett has JUST finished writing the second in her series, Through the Fire. This is a book she wrote to help spread awareness about head injuries caused on the football field. She’s done it in a very entertaining way. But, the message is one we should all think about as the danger is very real and can change the course of a mans life. her blog is http://www.denibartlett.blogspot.com/

Okay, so now, without further ado. Here are my answers to The Next Big Thing blog hop. I do hope it entertains you and intrigues you as well!

What is the working title of your book?

 

Eternal Night is the title of my newest BOOK. Although, it should be known that I have one of those minds that is always crafting another story, so I actually always have about two or three stories going on at the same time.

I also have the second story in the Celestial Abductions series started, as well. Tesla’s Completion will be coming out probably in the next few months. But it is just a short story, so it doesn’t count as a book.

Where did the idea come from for the

book?

Hmmm, Well, Eternal Night is the fourth book in the Order of Eternals series. The First book was a story I started writing back when I was somewhere around eighteen. (didn’t finish the APPROVED manuscript until I was nearly thirty-three) It developed over the years from a simple ONE book, with two brothers sharing a curse, into an entire series with SEVERAL heroes who became a part of something much more.

Now, the Celestial Abductions short story series idea came from a dream. Lame, I know, but that is the truth. I had a dream where Alien men where abducting Earth women to try to save BOTH species, because SOMETHING in the cosmos had gone terribly wrong and BOTH civilizations were doomed if they didn’t adapt and change.

What genre does your book fall under?

The Entire Order of Eternals series falls under several genres. I can never fit a story of mine into just ONE!  The MAIN genre is Paranormal Romance. Under that, you can find, horror, suspense, erotica, and even a little mystery. I guess you could say– sure, it’s smut. . . But there is so much more to it than just that.

Celestial Abductions series falls under Paranormal also, but it is Science Fiction and Fantasy as well.

Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?

In Eternal Night? Oh, that’s a no brainer. Vin Diesel, all the way! The character would need someone with the same kind of intensity as Riddock… Yeah, I’ve been envisioning him as Gideon ever since I saw Chronicles of Riddock.

For Muse, his love interest, I would really like Melinda Clarke. She’s a beautiful actress and she could pull off the character well.

Celestial Abductions is too short to think of it as anything but just a good quick read. I don’t see it in a movie scenario.

 What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?

. . .

Eternal Night is being somewhat stubborn with me at the moment. I don’t expect to have it even ready to go to the publisher until sometime in May. I haven’t even considered One sentence Blurbs.

Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?

I am under contract with my publishers, Gypsy Shadow Publishing. I hope they will continue to love and support my work.

How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?

As I said, this MS is being somewhat stubborn… Not as stubborn as the FIRST book of the series, but, then again… it is taking awhile. The characters seem to be at odds over what parts of their story needs to be told first!

Story two of Celestial Abductions, Tesla’s Completion, should be in my Editors hands as soon as the Holidays are complete.

What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?

Well, I think it is easier said as this. . . If you like books by authors like Sherilyn Kenyon, Christine Feehan, or Lara Adrian, I believe you would like my books as well.

 Who or What inspired you to write this book?

As I said, I was inspired into this entire series from the beginning when I was writing the first book, The Eternal.

 

What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest?

Well, if you read my other books of this series, you got to meet Muse and Gideon earlier. They made their first appearance in Eternal Moon. Then you get to know them better in Form of Eternity.

Gideon is a Vampire who was turned back in the time of the Great Crusades. Brandishing two blades, he’s moody and brooding. He trusts very few, even among the Order. Until lately, his best companion was an owl. Then there is Muse.

Muse is a shape-shifter with the power to become an owl. She is also Tenaryn’s sister. But that is supposed to be a secret . . .  Oops! Did I say too much already?

Sparrow’s Release has been released!

November 20, 2012 | Blog News | Permalink

Hello out there and HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!! I do hope everyone out there is having a blessed, safe and wonderful season. I am a little SLOW on the uptake, BUT I wanted to let EVERYONE know, Sparrow’s Release came available last night to many sites.

Smashwords, Barnes and Noble, Amazon, Omnilit, and several other sites all offer this latest short story by me. Or you can get it NOW on my publishers site. http://gypsyshadow.com Of course, I have to tell you, I have been completely humbled because I have already received notification for sales, which really just makes my day, because to me, it means you guys were really listening and waiting for it, even if you don’t comment on my blogs and FB, you still really do read them. Thank you. I love you guys!

To those of you who DIDN’T know yet, YES, it is indeed out and available to be added to your collection. While you’re looking, you owe it to yourself to check out all the other fabulous authors GSP has to offer. Such an array of talented storytellers, you don’t want to overlook any of them!

hugs to ALL!

Shiloh

Holiday Blues . . . Do you get them?

November 10, 2012 | Blog News | Permalink

Are the holidays hard for you? Do you find yourself getting emotional over fond memories? When I was a child, the holidays were my favorite time of year. I was out of school… Family who lived in different places would come in to town, there were lots of treats in the kitchen and it was just the perfect time to me. But I didn’t realize how hard it was on many of the adults around me.

When I was sixteen, I got my FIRST real dose of reality. As in where Holiday Blues really come from. Of course, at the time, I didn’t realize that was what it was. My Grandmother’s sister had to be put in the Hospital late that September. She didn’t get to come back out. We spent that Thanksgiving and Christmas (and every weekend leading up to it) in a strange city, making trips back and forth to the hospital and waiting for chances to get to see her. She was in CCU, so the time was limited. Then, January 31st, after the holidays were over, the great Spirit ended her misery and took her home.

After that, Christmas and Thanksgiving were never the same. Since then, many things have added to the array of reasons to have a difficult holiday season. Deaths of loved ones, bad things happening around that season . . . Every little thing can make an impact.

There are, of course, still reasons to STILL celebrate. . . to still be happy and thankful. I still feel blessed. But sometimes, when I least expect it, I’ll catch whiff of a particular fragrance. Hot cocoa with peppermint extract. . .  Chocolate covered coconut balls. . . Or hear a beautiful Christmas song , sung in a specific way, and I’m a goner.

I understand and appreciate better now how hard it must have been for the older generations of my family to keep up an ever cheerful facade and not let me see the tears I know my mother, and my grandmother sometimes cried over loved ones they had long lost. Now, it’s my turn to put on a cheerful face, smile and sing songs to make my grandchild smile… and hope someday she will be able to remember me fondly as she passes the same legacy down to her own young ones.

I will always hold to the wonderful memories I do have. They are more precious than gold and they encourage me to work my hardest and making wonderful memories for my own children and grandchildren to share.

This time of year is when suicide rates are at their highest. Many people go through depression and may have no one to share their pain with. I offer up my good will to all of them. If any of them happen to be reading this, I want them to know they aren’t alone. Our lost loved ones are still with us. They draw breath with every wonderful memory we have of them and they embrace us with those memories. It may seem hard, but try to imagine those memories as their way of maintaining contact with us. Love IS the biggest blessing, because it cannot be shackled or swayed by death or the passing of time.

I’m sorry my blog turned into a sappy moment, but I was overcome with the feeling that SOMEONE out there may have needed this. Bear with me, guys. I promise it won’t happen often! Happy Holidays to all of you, whatever way you celebrate and however you believe, be good to one another.

 

 

Halloween Poem

October 31, 2012 | Blog News | Permalink

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!!!

 

 

In the dark of the night,

By the light of the moon.

There were ghosts all around me,

As I whistled an eerie tune.

 

I hummed a little bit,

and the owls harmonized.

I sang to the spirits,

While wolves added their cries.

 

Around the witches flame,

I danced round and round.

And the spectre’s who watched me,

Rose up from the ground.

 

They joined in my dance,

And their songs turned to moans.

And I became cautious,

For I realized I was all alone.

 

I had gone in the forest,

With no thought of being cautious.

But then when the spirits came,

The fear I felt made me nauseous.

 

They took over my harmless dance,

And turned my songs to scary chants.

They moaned and spoke the darkest spells,

Calling forth what I thought must be the hounds of hell.

 

The wolves surrounded me,

While the owls and bats watched from the trees.

The night grew deathly silent.

With no stirrings; even from a breeze.

 

Suddenly the night was no longer my own,

For the Spirits were watching me.

And I was helpless against them,

You see; they frightened me.

 

Then the hooded man came,

Dark, mysterious and proud.

He stood mere inches from me,

I could hear his breathing ’twas so loud.

 

“Silly child!” he chided,

“Do you still not understand?

Halloween is for the Supernaturnal,

Not for mere mortal man.”

 

Then he took a step closer,

and a taller man I never knew.

As he gazed down upon me,

Fear changed my red blood to blue.

 

“Now run along home,”

He said with a smile.

“Our paths will cross again,

In a few more years and a few more miles.”

 

I took off at a run,

As the wolves howled their goodbyes.

I ran back to my safe silent home,

And never questioned the tears in my eyes.

 

Why had the man scared me so?

He hadn’t been overly cruel.

Yet he scared me away so easily,

Like a teacher scolding me in school.

 

It was years later,

when I finally realized.

It wasn’t the man’s voice which scared me so,

But the glowing red in his eyes.

 

Then one night as an adult,

I again decided to be brave.

A wolf came to me then,

And he led me to a cave.

 

Once inside,

He gave me a big surprise.

That night I discovered the wolf I followed,

Was my man with glowing eyes.

 

He looked me over,

With a kind of fiendish delight.

Then he reached out and I took his hand,

And he made me a child of the Night….

 

 

 

Celestial Abductions 1: Sparrow’s Release

October 18, 2012 | Blog News | Permalink

Sparrow is a street smart, savvy cop. No . . . scratch that. She just made Detective. She’s strong, self assured, and fairly satisfied with where she’s going in life. But then, it all changes in the middle of the night when she gets unexpected company. She’s heard stories of Alien abductions. She gives in to it fairly easily. She’ll be back in bed by morning with no memory of it anyway, right?

Navar is a ruler of a world very similar to Earth. For some time now, he has been watching the women of his race die off unexpectedly or become barren. He is a just and fair King. He would never, under normal circumstances, take part in the trafficking of women from another world. But, his people are beginning to suffer and desperate times call for desperate measures.